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Mattaz777
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Hey father, me again

I know it been five minutes

since I needed you again

I know I talk a lot

It just the fact that you are my best friend

Sometimes it is like you did not even hear

My cries for help during the struggle

Sorry I get angry when you feel so distant

Making me feel like I am on my own to face life's troubles

As I vent my frustrations, heartaches, and let downs

 I unleash the blame on you with the words

Spoken by the tears that drop from my eyes

How can I love you so much

want to please you so much

and let you down so much

Then you show up again

Wipe the tears from my eyes with your spirit

You put me back into perspective

Make me remember what is important

With the fact that you never left

Pulled back so I could see what was important

I might not have a million followers on Twitter

Liked 1000's of times on the gram or even Facebook mattered

What I am is loved by you

I would not trade my memories

Or what my eyes have seen

For all the time and money this world could offer

Well, father feeling better; you are like the perfect doctor

I thank you for listening

to the words, I say that do not even matter

letting me cry on your shoulder

not judging me for the mistakes I say

but understanding and helping me get it all out

You are my best friend, and my loving father.

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Nice job, and I totally relate.  This is kinda weird, but you posted this free verse poem today, and today is my dad's birthday!

 

You might want to make sure to get the apostrophes in here 

4 hours ago, Mattaz777 said:

I know it been five minutes

and here

4 hours ago, Mattaz777 said:

It just the fact that you are my best friend

 

Otherwise, great job.  The lines I relate to the most are

4 hours ago, Mattaz777 said:

How can I love you so much

want to please you so much

and let you down so much

Now that is just spot-on. 👍

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