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Christian TV pilot review - can you help?

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Soon I have the chance to pitch my book Jesus and Me as a cartoon series, and they asked for a pilot episode (and a show bible).


I've created a ten minute script but I'm nervous I've missed something obvious as I'm new to screenwriting.


Is there anyone experienced in this who would be willing to look over the pages and tell me if I've got any of the technical jargon etc wrong?






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