JoshuaCartwright 3 Posted October 19, 2020 Share Posted October 19, 2020 Hi! Soon I have the chance to pitch my book Jesus and Me as a cartoon series, and they asked for a pilot episode (and a show bible). I've created a ten minute script but I'm nervous I've missed something obvious as I'm new to screenwriting. Is there anyone experienced in this who would be willing to look over the pages and tell me if I've got any of the technical jargon etc wrong? Thanks, Joshua Quote Link to post Share on other sites
lynnmosher 7,428 Posted October 19, 2020 Share Posted October 19, 2020 Ooo...I wish I could help. Praying for you. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Ky_GirlatHeart 636 Posted October 19, 2020 Share Posted October 19, 2020 Are you looking for help on things such as punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Diamond Books 9 Posted October 21, 2020 Share Posted October 21, 2020 We wish we could help too. Praying it will all fall into place! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
DrRita 242 Posted October 31, 2020 Share Posted October 31, 2020 I will look at the first episode . . . PM me with the attachment. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
DrRita 242 Posted October 31, 2020 Share Posted October 31, 2020 PS. Do you know what a show bible is? I can help there too. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
JoshuaCartwright 3 Posted November 1, 2020 Author Share Posted November 1, 2020 I have replied by DM. Look forward to hearing from you. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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