Joshua Benefiel 93 Posted June 30 Step back from the edge of cavernous despair? Look away from the depths of ruin? Find a path from the forlorn To walk along the spires of the day's new light. Be swept up into the bosom of Love And forget the weight of the darkened day's past. (Just a bit of a poem that I've been working on lately.) 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MaryAnn Diorio 56 Posted June 30 Very nice image, Joshua! I look forward to reading the finished poem. Blessings, MaryAnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nicola 1,426 Posted July 1 Well done! Those are powerful images and your rhythm is compelling. I also look forward to the rest! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ky_GirlatHeart 98 Posted July 25 I like what's here so far! Keep it up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
