Joshua Benefiel 119 Posted June 30, 2020 Share Posted June 30, 2020 Step back from the edge of cavernous despair? Look away from the depths of ruin? Find a path from the forlorn To walk along the spires of the day's new light. Be swept up into the bosom of Love And forget the weight of the darkened day's past. (Just a bit of a poem that I've been working on lately.) 1 Link to post Share on other sites
MaryAnn Diorio 56 Posted June 30, 2020 Share Posted June 30, 2020 Very nice image, Joshua! I look forward to reading the finished poem. Blessings, MaryAnn Link to post Share on other sites
Nicola 1,489 Posted July 1, 2020 Share Posted July 1, 2020 Well done! Those are powerful images and your rhythm is compelling. I also look forward to the rest! Link to post Share on other sites
Ky_GirlatHeart 669 Posted July 25, 2020 Share Posted July 25, 2020 I like what's here so far! Keep it up! Link to post Share on other sites
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