Back From Despair

[Joshua Benefiel 119]

Step back from the edge of cavernous despair?

Look away from the depths of ruin? 

Find a path from the forlorn

To walk along the spires of the day's new light.

Be swept up into the bosom of Love

And forget the weight of the darkened day's past.

 

(Just a bit of a poem that I've been working on lately.)

[MaryAnn Diorio 56]

Very nice image, Joshua! I look forward to reading the finished poem. 

 

Blessings,

MaryAnn

[Nicola 1,489]

Well done! Those are powerful images and your rhythm is compelling. I also look forward to the rest!

[Ky_GirlatHeart 669]

I like what's here so far! Keep it up!