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Jared Williams

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The Purpose of Pain: A 60 Day devotional for those in search of a truth to trust in.

 

A bit long winded for a title, but the devotional systematically goes through what the problem of pain is - "If God is good and all powerful, why is there pain and evil in the world?"  - and then provide 13 clear and succinct biblical answers for that question. Although this devotional cannot alleviate pain or take away the evil, it is hoped that it can provide sufficient answers to the point that trust can be built upon God's faithfulness. 

 

It is a first attempt at writing a devotional, and with such an important topic, the feedback I wish the most is upon clarity, but any feedback would be appreciated. 

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You do need to reword, and, if possible, simplify that subtitle. For one, it ends in a preposition, "in," so it's grammatically incorrect. I think I would end it--without a period--after (capitalized) "Devotional." "The Purpose of Pain: A 60 Day Devotional" Good luck.

 

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