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I know I posted a thread on this a while ago but can't find it.

Just got to share this. I recieved my MS report this evening from the same agency who tore my previous work apart. (They were right about it and I did do the rewrite they suggested but cried buckets beforehand)

Today's report for Demon of Sphinx was very positive. The reader said they read it ( 1s time) in one sitting. 

 

They suggest some reworking of the order of the chapters Some development of o a character and how to heighten the suspense.  I am soooooo pleased.  

 

The nice thing  is that I know they don't praise without reason.  I now know it is worth me continuing with the book.

 

Wow. 

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1 hour ago, Bob Leone said:

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Cake and Ice Cream for you!!!

YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy, doesn't look as good as the other one, but I'll take a bite and see. 😂

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4 hours ago, Sarah Daffy said:

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy, doesn't look as good as the other one, but I'll take a bite and see. 😂

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy, it was awful. It tasted like air. 😂😂🤣

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Just now, Sophie said:

Why does everyone have to have such yummy food?

😂😭 I know.

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I didn’t have ice cream for two weeks (lol, a long time for me). At church a couple was having their 50th wedding anniversary. There was cake and ice cream. I said I didn’t want any. But I gave in. It was the best tasting ice cream I ever had. My son laughed at me and said it was only because I didn’t have any for a while. Anyway all your talk about treats is making me give in and buy a quart of ice cream. Lol,  shame on all of you. 😂

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Thanks everyone  The cake was great😁.  

 

I am in the middle of the charity build I mentioned elsewhere so not writing or posting this week or next.  

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Congratulations @Shamrock. It's good to hear that you've got something they liked. I hope it will be easy changes without changing the story much.

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