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Nikki❤️

Forever Remain

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As sickness rages through my veins

 

Causing physical agony and leaving behind emotional rains

 

In one moment it feels as if life will never be the same 

 

At mercy's door step I called on your name 

 

To Your glory, love and faithfulness I can proclaim

 

As You saw to answer, when I called out Your name

 

In my heart You'll forever remain

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Beautiful poem! 

 

How about "Mercy's Door"  or "Forever Remain"  as the title?

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28 minutes ago, dadcard2 said:

End rhyming is difficult for each line - nicely done

Thank you very much❤️

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9 minutes ago, Nikki❤️ said:

Thank you very much❤️

 

37 minutes ago, dadcard2 said:

End rhyming is difficult for each line - nicely done

I just realized that I don't have an even number of lines.  Is that a poetry structure rule?  I don't really know the specifics and rules of poetry, I just write.  I would like to learn❤️

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35 minutes ago, Nikki❤️ said:

 

I just realized that I don't have an even number of lines.  Is that a poetry structure rule?  I don't really know the specifics and rules of poetry, I just write.  I would like to learn❤️

I am not well versed (pun intended) in poetry.  There are so many forms.  Here is a website for 100:

 

https://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/list-of-50-poetic-forms-for-poets

 

 

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18 hours ago, Nikki❤️ said:

Thank you HK1.

You're welcome :)

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