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Shirley Scurlock

He is Carrying Me

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Song Lyrics

 

If you see my steps are slower

Or Im stumbling on my way

If it seems my burdens heavier

And Im facing darker days

If my voice is so much weaker

Or Im praising in softer tones

if you see me in the distance

And you think I stand alone


Don't believe,

what your eyes see.

Its not the truth

, He is carrying me

Don't count me as forsaken,

rejected or abandoned.

Don't believe,

what your eyes see,

he is carrying me

 

If you think I'll never make it

Or this time I'll surely fall

If it seems my heart is broken

And I have no friends at all

If my body's sick and aged

Or it seems I've lost my way

Don't worry about me brother

This is all I have to say

 

Don't believe

 what your eyes see

Its not the truth,

He is carrying me

Don't count me as forsaken

, rejected or abandoned

Don't believe,

what your eyes see

 he is carrying  me

 

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I so needed to read this...  I love how you convey that we can't live this life on our own (nor are we expected to...). We are joyfully kept and carried to the fold...as the lost lamb we are...

 

So very well done...I am grateful to have stumbled on this treasure so early this morning...  

 

Most Humbly,

 

SW

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I like the repetition of He is carrying me.

 

In one or two spots the I am contraction did not have the ' and read Im not I'm.

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On 7/27/2019 at 7:36 AM, Scribewriter said:

I so needed to read this...  I love how you convey that we can't live this life on our own (nor are we expected to...). We are joyfully kept and carried to the fold...as the lost lamb we are...

 

So very well done...I am grateful to have stumbled on this treasure so early this morning...  

 

Most Humbly,

 

SW

I am so blessed by your comment! Thank you so much.

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On 7/27/2019 at 9:53 AM, lynnmosher said:

Ooo...I love this, Shirley! Wonderful! 🧡

Thank you so much Lynn! Means a lot coming from a Talent like you! 

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On 8/12/2019 at 5:08 PM, dadcard2 said:

I like the repetition of He is carrying me.

 

In one or two spots the I am contraction did not have the ' and read Im not I'm.

Thank you. I appreciate the criticism. I actually wrote it as song lyrics and just posted on a whim. I needed feedback!     

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6 hours ago, Shirley Scurlock said:

Thank you so much Lynn! Means a lot coming from a Talent like you! 

 

Awww, thank you, sweetie. So kind of you! :D🧡

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On 7/27/2019 at 9:31 AM, Shirley Scurlock said:

 

If you see my steps are slower

Or Im stumbling on my way

If it seems my burdens heavier

And Im facing darker days

If my voice is so much weaker

Or Im praising in softer tones

if you see me in the distance

And you think I stand alone


Don't believe,

what your eyes see.

Its not the truth

, He is carrying me

Don't count me as forsaken,

rejected or abandoned.

Don't believe,

what your eyes see,

he is carrying me

 

If you think I'll never make it

Or this time I'll surely fall

If it seems my heart is broken

And I have no friends at all

If my body's sick and aged

Or it seems I've lost my way

Don't worry about me brother

This is all I have to say

 

Don't believe

 what your eyes see

Its not the truth,

He is carrying me

Don't count me as forsaken

, rejected or abandoned

Don't believe,

what your eyes see

 he is carrying  me

 

Hi Shirley, I love your beautiful and tender song lyrics, written straight from the heart. It's such a wonderful reflection of the precious love of our Lord, Who carries us during those difficult times. God bless you! 

Edited by Christine Mitchell
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