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Congratulations @Zee!

Is there anything I can help with?

I've never heard of that site, sounds interesting. So what happened?

@Ky_GirlatHeartGo for it! I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

Cool!

Beautiful! I love your theme of forgiveness.

Answers in Genesis is a really cool site, I appreciate all their work.

That's a good question, but I don't know if I have a good answer. I know when I'm writing I try to promise my reader either lots of mystery and action of some kind and of course I try to deliver on those promises.

It's a intriguing story and it's pretty clear right off the bat that they live on a alien world.

If you wanted to do a story about aliens, just for the sake of doing it about aliens, you could make your characters look human and still be technical aliens. Especially if it is easier. Just do a word check and have the computer search for every time you brought up fur and three eyes.

Beautifully done! Reminds me of Sam's speech in Lord of the Rings, light shining brighter when all is dark. Encouraging and deep.

Yes, thank you!

I'm very interested, but I might need to mute the scary parts for my baby. I don't know how audible works exactly, is it just listening no reading?

Breath taking poem @Leah_Donavan!

After Easter would be fine! It's 71,646 words, is that too much?