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  1. kriver7 started following locked out of the crit room, Hi out there. I'm Becky :), Unlike Baby, I kinda like the corner. and 1 other
  2. kriver7 started following Writing Ethic's Questions and An Orphan Dog's Poem
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    Hi Anon, Thank you for the review I really do appreciate it. It truly was quite a shock being complete blind in that eye going to sleep. Then suddenly being awakened and able to see quite clearly all in a very short time period. It was all quite a miraculous experience. Thanks again for the review. Have you posted any work I would like to return the favor. Best regards, K River 7
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    Hi Lynn, Thank you for fixing this poem. for me. I hate to ask you, but would you do it again in the poetry club lol. I'm probably going to be a real pest if I don't find out how to edit my work real soon. I posted a poem there too called: "An Orphan Dog's Prayer" It has the same problem. the line are all over the place. The stanzas are 4 lines each and each line has end rhyme. I would try to edit the poem myself but I can't figure out how to get in to do that. The editing ability seems to leave after the write has been posted for awhile. Is this normal? Beca
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    the gift of sight I have received the difference hard to believe only perfect sight was conceived now that it's here I'm so relieved it’s been one year since I could see anything in one eye with clarity everything was opaque and shadows couldn't distinguish hand from elbow effectively blind in one eye I was afraid someone could die cause driving at night was scary at times it got kind of hairy I prayed for one of the best a doctor above all the rest GOD opened the doors for me surgeon's top ten in o
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    Better Than Perfect Sight This is a story of a personal journey that started in May of 2016. I began to notice a slight difference in my sight. Nothing too major, just a problem seeing at night. Sometimes the light from cars coming towards me bothered me. I started praying about it as my eyes grew worse. I have never really had good eye sight. This was a problem all through school. Because I was tall, I was always forced to sit in the back. But, then I couldn't see the board. I have worn extremely thick glasses from the time I was two yrs old. In the early 1950's I had major eye
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