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KR LaLonde

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  1. Wow! That's quite a story! Amazing, really.

    That sounds very interesting about you looking like both your biological and stepfather alike.

     

    What do you mean your mom and dad became those things? Weren't they already doing that? Or were they busy with other jobs/careers?

     

    Here: <<why till years later. My stepfather, on the other side>> I think you could end the paragraph with "years later" and start a new one with your stepfather, since they are two different people and it's kind of like you're changing the subject of the paragraph. That could just be me, though...

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  2. OH WOW!!

    I know exactly how you must be feeling!!!

    I had a TBI (Trauma Brain Injury) when I was 18 and even now (more than 14 years later) it's affecting me. It will affect me for the rest of my life.

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