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FireFeet
06-24-2005, 02:19 PM
“Stand Fast In A Thin Place.”

A thin place is a Celtic phrase that refers to a moment in time when the distance between heaven and earth, between God and us seems much smaller. It is a moment in which the divide between man and God is thin.

She is a woman who is beautiful in pain. Through her eyes you can see the scars on her heart from too many years of marriage to an abusive alcoholic husband. Her body shows the ravages of an unceasing battle with cancer. And on a chain around her neck, she wears two Catholic medallions of saints that are all that she has left of a son who was taken from her before she was willing to let him go. She has a depth of beauty to her soul, a complex wisdom in her heart. She seems almost ethereal, as though she stands with one foot already in heaven.

With a poetic grace and a lyrical aching, she unfolds the story of her life. I long to minister to her and to offer her God’s hope and wisdom. But I know that what she needs is for someone to finally hear the secret agony that has molded her soul. I know that what she needs is someone to hold her hands and weep the tears that she is unable to shed. I know that what she needs is a vessel in which to pour the wisdom that has cost her too much.

As my tears splash onto our clasped hands and she sings the story of her pain, I comprehend at a new level a profound truth. All of life’s suffering and grief and doubt and uncertainty can cause us to become stalwart and bitter, reclusive and cold. We can run and try to find rest in a place we design and call safe. Or we can allow the agony to lead us to a place of wisdom and love, peace and communion. We can run to a place where we find ourselves caught up in the everlasting arms of love. The torments of this life can lead us further from God…or they can lead us to a new place of discovering His goodness.

As she finishes her story, she removes her son’s medallions, perhaps her most valuable possession, from around her neck. She presses them into my hand, and in a voice that hints of songs of angels, she whispers, “Stand fast in a thin place.”

TRSharp
06-24-2005, 02:49 PM
I like it. Love the title. Makes me want to know more(a VERY good thing). I really think you should consider enough expansion to satisfy the detail-curious, without spoiling the power of a sketch done with a few simple lines. Setting? Relationship?
Maybe just a couple of sentences or phrases... !thumbsup!

rodojeki
06-24-2005, 04:00 PM
FireFeet as I read this I felt like every human being could identify with it....not because of the abuse you speak of or the death of a son, but just the tragedies of life, the pain that we think we must bear alone and outside of His covering...... as humans we continue to desire more than what we are capable of on our own....life is bearable with Him, pain and agony is bearable with Him, yet why do we do we return to our living hell, and find comfort in the arms of man? Beautifully written

Donna

FireFeet
06-25-2005, 10:14 AM
I really think you should consider enough expansion to satisfy the detail-curious, without spoiling the power of a sketch done with a few simple lines. Setting? Relationship?

This was a moment of the sacred that magically appeared in the midst of the mundane. This happened in the middle of the work day, and she is a stranger, almost...I sorta know her a tiny bit. The whole encounter itself felt like a "thin place moment." I don't even know how to explain that without getting lost in the boring details. I just wanted to capture the mystery. But thanks for the comments. :)

...as I read this I felt like every human being could identify with it...

That's what I was hoping for...that anyone could relate and be encouraged. ;)

ellenjames
06-25-2005, 10:40 AM
Firefeet,

You draw us into this poignant sketch and keep our attention to the end.
Donna is correct when she said "every human being can identify with it."

Thank God, there is One we can turn to.
He understands, when no one else does.
He cares for us, when others may not care.

Great writing. !thumbsup! Keep up the good work!
Ellenjames

DrRita
06-25-2005, 11:53 AM
Dale,

What a beautiful sketch of bearing one another's burdens as the scripture has taught us to do. This woman could be Any Woman because we so totally identify with with her. Thank you for sharing this timeless imprint of sorrow and suffering which our Lord has redeemed and redignified in the cross.

dublinheart
06-25-2005, 12:59 PM
Firefeet,
This is a fantastic treat to read, although it left me wanting more. I assume that's good. The title itself is enough to capture the reader. You are a very picturesque writer as I was viewing the scenes in my mind as I read. Very captivating and intriquing, FF. Love it muchly! !thumbsup!

Merry
06-25-2005, 02:12 PM
I couldn't respond to this yesterday after I read it because it was just too heartbreaking. Y'know, I don't think I will ever be capable of writing with that much heart and soul. God Bless You, Dale. That was extraordinary.

FireFeet
06-26-2005, 04:12 PM
Y'know, I don't think I will ever be capable of writing with that much heart and soul.

But I don't think I'll ever write anything as entertaining as a story of a looney doctor and his pet sea monster....God has different purposes for each us through this gift of writing. :)

Merry
06-27-2005, 12:51 AM
Oy, matey, you're a caution! :D