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kkmortimer
12-11-2007, 10:23 AM
Sitting at the table, looking down,
So many pieces all scattered around.
I値l take them one by one
And place them where they belong.
Each on its own is incomplete,
But fit together, I値l have a masterpiece.
Without them all, it痴 left undone
If I知 missing even one.
So I値l fit them all where they should be
And a work of art then all can see.

Sitting on the Throne, looking down
So many people all scattered around.
I will take them one by one
And place them where they belong.
Each on his own is incomplete,
But fit together, I値l have a masterpiece.
Without them all, my work痴 undone
Even if I知 missing only one.
I値l fit them all where they should be
So my glorious church, the world can see.

ChristChild
12-17-2007, 10:27 AM
I like the insight of this poem. I'll let others glean the meaning by reading it, but I believe the comparison is valid and meaningful. :)

Shane

dlreed
12-22-2007, 09:54 PM
I loved the metaphoric hook! Great job!

lynnmosher
12-22-2007, 10:48 PM
Kay, I love, love, love this! Very nicely done! Great job!